Wednesday, August 20, 2014

                        Response to the Sustainable Development Solutions Network’s
           
       Action Agenda for Sustainable Development 2015-2030

                                       By Alan N. Connor

The ten proposed Sustainable Development Goals (SDGs) are appropriate. They are intended to establish a framework for implementing sustainable development post 2015 when the UN’s Millenium    Development Goals (MDGs) expire. The terminology in some is very broad, general and amorphous and subject to a variety of interpretations. To some extent, that too is appropriate. Because need, ecology, resources and culture vary from community to community---rural agricultural vs. urban industrial, temperate vs. tropical vs. arctic--- different goal definitions and specifics are appropriate for different places. Strategy and tactical action has to vary from place to place to account for those variations.

The report defines problems and barriers to achievement of MDG goals and targets. It sets a general frame for modifying the means to approach some of those targets via the SDGs that are slated to replace the 2000-2015 MDGs.  But specific strategies are often absent.

The authors argue correctly that going back to doing Business As Usual (BAU) prior to the 2008 financial collapse, will not enable sustainable development. They point out that it was a major cause of the failure to reach most MDG targets as well as the cause of the 2008 recession. Nevertheless, they advocate instituting and continuing much of the same global big business investment in developing countries and global institutional control of critical systems—eg: energy, transportation, international relations and trade.

They are for the inclusion of the poor, near poor and workers of the World in global and national policy conversations. A strategy for including them is not discussed. The report mentions, in a number of places, giving them power to participate. Leaders of multi and transnational corporations, international institutions, multi and transnational corporations do not voluntarily share or give up power. It has to be taken. Too often it has been taken or attempted to be taken by violent revolution. We need a strategy of inclusion that by passes that.

There is hope now days that the transfer of some power to the common people, so they can participate in and actually influence the conversations, will be nonviolent. We saw that two years ago in Tunisia. I saw it work in the city of Dayton, Ohio in the 70s. A number of civil societies and NGOs in developing countries are speaking up. Some have written responses to this report and to the High Level Panel’s (HLP) report on the Post 2015 Agenda. Because they may have support of their governments and their sheer numbers, they may be able to defy extant leaders and institutions such as the World Bank, the International Monetary Fund (IMF) and the World Trade Organization (WTO) with immunity .

The Sustainable Development Solutions Network (SDSN) was composed of members of a number of professional, business, academic, scientific and civic organizations. One is the International Society of
Ecological Economics (ISEE) of which I am a member, although I am not an economist.  They mean well. But most have no idea of what the poor and near poor have been up against for centuries. Many, maybe most network members have been indoctrinated in conventional, neo-classical economics and
and cling to those theories and practices.  Although in their report they claim those BAU practices have failed and will continue to do so, thinking of another paradigm is difficult. Some of their proposals are tweaks of that paradigm.

In their draft, they support a global economy and global governance. They give lip service to localization but do not really support it. For those from poor, developing countries or from any country, to participate in policy conversations effectively their power will have to be accepted by those now in power.
(The red print is my thoughts or what I think needs to be included.)         
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Sustainable development has four dimensions according to the network. They are (1) Economic Development to end extreme poverty, (2) Social Inclusion, (3) Environmental Sustainability and (4) Good Governance. 

Economic Development is not defined or described. I assume that since it is a term in that has been in  wide use by many for a number of years, the network assumed no definition for the purposes of their
discussion was needed. Extreme poverty is defined as household income below $1.25 per day. That is extreme. There are other definitions I won’t mention here.

Social Inclusion is not defined. To me, it means including all people in policy making conversations at all levels of government from local municipal to global. It also means including all people’s access to natural resources, education, work, health care and other community opportunities.

Environmental Sustainability means staying within Earth’s planetary boundaries. That is, do not extract or
harvest Earth’s resources at rates faster than the resources can reproduce or regenerate themselves.

Good Governance is non-corrupt, transparent, socially just and open to participation of all interested and concerned people---i.e. it is inclusive.

                                              The Ten Sustainable Development Goals

1.    Eradicate Extreme Poverty: Poverty that is not extreme is not defined. What they are shooting for by implication is prosperity for all.  The network’s major strategy is “adopt sustainable agricultural methods worldwide, also maintain a clean water supply—no ag chemical or livestock pollutants. Stabilizing population and producing food primarily for local community consumption and sustainability is not mentioned.  Community food and natural resource sovereignty are not mentioned, nor is any means of production other than agriculture. Later in 7, productive cities are discussed.

2.    Development Within Planetary Boundaries: Limit extraction and harvesting of natural resources to the rate at which they can be reproduced. Decouple resource use from income and economic growth. Shift to low carbon energy sources for agriculture, transit, energy generation and construction of buildings and infrastructure. Not included were: reduce discarding goods to rates at which the ecosystem can absorb them. That reduces pollution and helps maintain biodiversity. Also not included --- as all ecological economists do---is coupling resource use with local community ecological, economic and social sustainability and banning the conversion of non-renewable resources to nonessentials.

3.    Effective Learning for All Children and Youth for a Livelihood: Adopt a lifecycle perspective on the learning needs of individuals of all ages. In some communities and cultures, training for many traditional occupations has been shunned or ignored. Starting in early childhood, access to learning those occupations---farming, fishing, forestry--- should be supported in ecologically sound ways .(Italics added for emphasis.) Societies need to (1) promote and support the central role of teacher, especially the innovative teacher, (2) look beyond traditional and formal schools (3) support and implement adult women’s functional literacy. Literate mothers enable early childhood learning. Also vocational education and apprenticeships to connect students with potential employers and jobs. Does not mention that business, particularly multi and transnationals are not in business to create jobs and employment. Local governments and communities must work to develop economically, ecologically and socially sustainable work roles and enable local people to learn to competently perform them and be justly compensated.


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4.     Gender Equality, Social Inclusion, Human Rights: To me this is one of the very broad and amorphous goals. Human Rights covers a lot of territory. Discrimination of any group undermines sustainable development. The strategy suggested for achieving this goal is instituting legal and administrative reforms---actions---that realize, not guarantee, the economic and social rights, including equal access to basic public services and infrastructure of all members of society. I would add: legally guarantee equal access of all members of the community to the community’s natural and capital resources on the condition that extraction, harvesting and use of such resource increases the probability of community sustainability. Promote peace, eliminate violent civil conflict. Missing is a strategy for promoting peace---within communities, nations, the World---or eliminating violent civil conflict.

5.    Achieve Health and Well Being for All: Well being is not defined, therefore amorphous to me. It could be defined as a minimum quality of life, a life style, standard of living all of which might vary by person, place or culture. Socio-economic status or minimum income level---a lot higher than $1.25 per day---might be used to define it. The suggested strategy includes (1) deploy more community health workers, (2) increase public investment in extension of primary health systems, (3) develop and establish universal health coverage. But a strategy is needed to do that.

6.    Improve Agricultural Systems, Raise Rural Prosperity: Identifies environmental problems in food production including human induced climate change,          inefficient use of water and loss of bio-diversity. It IDs the malfunctioning of the ag-industrial food chain but specifies no particular mal-functions. Points to post harvest waste, which is significant, and spoilage due to poor storage and processing systems. Does not address a worldwide food distribution system that delivers food to the economic elites and bypasses poor and working class communities, nor the export emphasis of industrial agribusiness which prices agriculture labor out of the food market it produces. Strategically, It does support enabling small land holders to produce increased yields for and connect to local and wider markets. Pushing soil too hard usually requires chemicals that feed plants, degrade soil and pollute ground and surface water via runoff. Claims net food production, worldwide, will have to increase 70 percent by 2050 to feed the increasing population. It does not address reducing food waste by 70 percent or more, population control or correcting the maldistribution problem. Bringing more land into production is suggested. They do not consider what types of land should not be converted to agriculture.

7.     Empower Inclusive, Productive, Resilient Cities:  This is another amorphous one. Urban populations and densities are projected to increase. Half the World’s population now is Urban.
Problems are cited. Urban poverty and slums being two major ones. The strategy is to reduce poverty, end slum formation and increase productivity---of what?---and insure universal access to infrastructure and services such as housing, water reticulation, sanitation, waste and insuring such universal access. It does argue for the use of modern technologies, particularly information communication technology (ICT) to ”help improve city governance, energy and resource use efficiency, delivery of services and create employment opportunities.” ICT can underpin smart grids---maybe---for urban power, water, transport, education and health care.

8.    Curb Human Induced Climate Change and Ensure Clean Energy for All: Defines the problem, its seriousness and its various aspects. Strategies include (1) increase energy efficiency, (2) increase urban land use density, (3) intelligent power grids, (4) increase use of renewable energy sources—possibly nuclear---and carbon capture and sequestration, (5) reduce deforestation and emission reduction in agriculture, (6) reduction of industrial GHG emissions. Local community cooperative or municipal ownership of power generating, storage and transmission systems emphasized and encouraged. Development of new technologies to accomplish the above. The network claims that transformation of energy use in the industrial and agricultural systems of the World---I would add developed World---will perhaps be the greatest

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political, technical and organizational challenge... feat if accomplished humanity will ever face.  Throughout the draft, transfer of technology from.the rich, industrially developed world to the developing world is stressed. Innovative people in    developing countries often develop technologies that are more appropriate to their environment and culture using local materials and resources that are less costly than imported technologies.

9. Secure            Ecosystem Services, Biodiversity and Good management of Natural Resources:
Ensure robust ecosystems—oceans, seas, coastal zones forests, mountains, dry and wetlands. Require polluters to pay. All—government, business, institutions, CSOs—participate in and protect and preserve local, regional ecosystems including environmental commons—fertile ground, rivers, creeks, aquifers, woodland. Have robust, transparent, monitoring, inventory and protective systems in place by 2020. Local communities should have sovereignty over all common natural and capital resources within their jurisdictions. All local and regional governments and businesses/farms commit to transparent management agricultural land, mines, woodlands, water and hydrocarbon resources. All the above are good means and ends to shoot for, but we need to plan strategies to develop and establish them.

10.Transform Governance for Sustainable Development:  “The public sector, business…commit   
 to transparency, accountability and government without corruption.” Committing and following through are two different behaviors. A strong community civil society of common people is needed to ensure non-corruption.  “International rules governing international finance, trade, corporate reporting, technology, and intellectual property should be made constant achieving SDGs.  I’m not sure what that means but international and national rules on those issues should not preempt local and regional mores, customs and laws. The three targets look OK but intellectual property needs redefining and reconsideration as a useful sustainable development construct.

                         Response to the Sustainable Development Solutions Network’s
           
       Action Agenda for Sustainable Development 2015-2030

                                       By Alan N. Connor

The ten proposed Sustainable Development Goals (SDGs) are appropriate. They are intended to establish a framework for implementing sustainable development post 2015 when the UN’s Millenium    Development Goals (MDGs) expire. The terminology in some is very broad, general and amorphous and subject to a variety of interpretations. To some extent, that too is appropriate. Because need, ecology, resources and culture vary from community to community---rural agricultural vs. urban industrial, temperate vs. tropical vs. arctic--- different goal definitions and specifics are appropriate for different places. Strategy and tactical action has to vary from place to place to account for those variations.

The report defines problems and barriers to achievement of MDG goals and targets. It sets a general frame for modifying the means to approach some of those targets via the SDGs that are slated to replace the 2000-2015 MDGs.  But specific strategies are often absent.

The authors argue correctly that going back to doing Business As Usual (BAU) prior to the 2008 financial collapse, will not enable sustainable development. They point out that it was a major cause of the failure to reach most MDG targets as well as the cause of the 2008 recession. Nevertheless, they advocate instituting and continuing much of the same global big business investment in developing countries and global institutional control of critical systems—eg: energy, transportation, international relations and trade.

They are for the inclusion of the poor, near poor and workers of the World in global and national policy conversations. A strategy for including them is not discussed. The report mentions, in a number of places, giving them power to participate. Leaders of multi and transnational corporations, international institutions, multi and transnational corporations do not voluntarily share or give up power. It has to be taken. Too often it has been taken or attempted to be taken by violent revolution. We need a strategy of inclusion that by passes that.

There is hope now days that the transfer of some power to the common people, so they can participate in and actually influence the conversations, will be nonviolent. We saw that two years ago in Tunisia. I saw it work in the city of Dayton, Ohio in the 70s. A number of civil societies and NGOs in developing countries are speaking up. Some have written responses to this report and to the High Level Panel’s (HLP) report on the Post 2015 Agenda. Because they may have support of their governments and their sheer numbers, they may be able to defy extant leaders and institutions such as the World Bank, the International Monetary Fund (IMF) and the World Trade Organization (WTO) with immunity .

The Sustainable Development Solutions Network (SDSN) was composed of members of a number of professional, business, academic, scientific and civic organizations. One is the International Society of
Ecological Economics (ISEE) of which I am a member, although I am not an economist.  They mean well. But most have no idea of what the poor and near poor have been up against for centuries. Many, maybe most network members have been indoctrinated in conventional, neo-classical economics and
and cling to those theories and practices.  Although in their report they claim those BAU practices have failed and will continue to do so, thinking of another paradigm is difficult. Some of their proposals are tweaks of that paradigm.

In their draft, they support a global economy and global governance. They give lip service to localization but do not really support it. For those from poor, developing countries or from any country, to participate in policy conversations effectively their power will have to be accepted by those now in power.
(The red print is my thoughts or what I think needs to be included.)         
                                                                                     1
Sustainable development has four dimensions according to the network. They are (1) Economic Development to end extreme poverty, (2) Social Inclusion, (3) Environmental Sustainability and (4) Good Governance. 

Economic Development is not defined or described. I assume that since it is a term in that has been in  wide use by many for a number of years, the network assumed no definition for the purposes of their
discussion was needed. Extreme poverty is defined as household income below $1.25 per day. That is extreme. There are other definitions I won’t mention here.

Social Inclusion is not defined. To me, it means including all people in policy making conversations at all levels of government from local municipal to global. It also means including all people’s access to natural resources, education, work, health care and other community opportunities.

Environmental Sustainability means staying within Earth’s planetary boundaries. That is, do not extract or
harvest Earth’s resources at rates faster than the resources can reproduce or regenerate themselves.

Good Governance is non-corrupt, transparent, socially just and open to participation of all interested and concerned people---i.e. it is inclusive.

                                              The Ten Sustainable Development Goals

1.    Eradicate Extreme Poverty: Poverty that is not extreme is not defined. What they are shooting for by implication is prosperity for all.  The network’s major strategy is “adopt sustainable agricultural methods worldwide, also maintain a clean water supply—no ag chemical or livestock pollutants. Stabilizing population and producing food primarily for local community consumption and sustainability is not mentioned.  Community food and natural resource sovereignty are not mentioned, nor is any means of production other than agriculture. Later in 7, productive cities are discussed.

2.    Development Within Planetary Boundaries: Limit extraction and harvesting of natural resources to the rate at which they can be reproduced. Decouple resource use from income and economic growth. Shift to low carbon energy sources for agriculture, transit, energy generation and construction of buildings and infrastructure. Not included were: reduce discarding goods to rates at which the ecosystem can absorb them. That reduces pollution and helps maintain biodiversity. Also not included --- as all ecological economists do---is coupling resource use with local community ecological, economic and social sustainability and banning the conversion of non-renewable resources to nonessentials.

3.    Effective Learning for All Children and Youth for a Livelihood: Adopt a lifecycle perspective on the learning needs of individuals of all ages. In some communities and cultures, training for many traditional occupations has been shunned or ignored. Starting in early childhood, access to learning those occupations---farming, fishing, forestry--- should be supported in ecologically sound ways .(Italics added for emphasis.) Societies need to (1) promote and support the central role of teacher, especially the innovative teacher, (2) look beyond traditional and formal schools (3) support and implement adult women’s functional literacy. Literate mothers enable early childhood learning. Also vocational education and apprenticeships to connect students with potential employers and jobs. Does not mention that business, particularly multi and transnationals are not in business to create jobs and employment. Local governments and communities must work to develop economically, ecologically and socially sustainable work roles and enable local people to learn to competently perform them and be justly compensated.


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4.     Gender Equality, Social Inclusion, Human Rights: To me this is one of the very broad and amorphous goals. Human Rights covers a lot of territory. Discrimination of any group undermines sustainable development. The strategy suggested for achieving this goal is instituting legal and administrative reforms---actions---that realize, not guarantee, the economic and social rights, including equal access to basic public services and infrastructure of all members of society. I would add: legally guarantee equal access of all members of the community to the community’s natural and capital resources on the condition that extraction, harvesting and use of such resource increases the probability of community sustainability. Promote peace, eliminate violent civil conflict. Missing is a strategy for promoting peace---within communities, nations, the World---or eliminating violent civil conflict.

5.    Achieve Health and Well Being for All: Well being is not defined, therefore amorphous to me. It could be defined as a minimum quality of life, a life style, standard of living all of which might vary by person, place or culture. Socio-economic status or minimum income level---a lot higher than $1.25 per day---might be used to define it. The suggested strategy includes (1) deploy more community health workers, (2) increase public investment in extension of primary health systems, (3) develop and establish universal health coverage. But a strategy is needed to do that.

6.    Improve Agricultural Systems, Raise Rural Prosperity: Identifies environmental problems in food production including human induced climate change,          inefficient use of water and loss of bio-diversity. It IDs the malfunctioning of the ag-industrial food chain but specifies no particular mal-functions. Points to post harvest waste, which is significant, and spoilage due to poor storage and processing systems. Does not address a worldwide food distribution system that delivers food to the economic elites and bypasses poor and working class communities, nor the export emphasis of industrial agribusiness which prices agriculture labor out of the food market it produces. Strategically, It does support enabling small land holders to produce increased yields for and connect to local and wider markets. Pushing soil too hard usually requires chemicals that feed plants, degrade soil and pollute ground and surface water via runoff. Claims net food production, worldwide, will have to increase 70 percent by 2050 to feed the increasing population. It does not address reducing food waste by 70 percent or more, population control or correcting the maldistribution problem. Bringing more land into production is suggested. They do not consider what types of land should not be converted to agriculture.

7.     Empower Inclusive, Productive, Resilient Cities:  This is another amorphous one. Urban populations and densities are projected to increase. Half the World’s population now is Urban.
Problems are cited. Urban poverty and slums being two major ones. The strategy is to reduce poverty, end slum formation and increase productivity---of what?---and insure universal access to infrastructure and services such as housing, water reticulation, sanitation, waste and insuring such universal access. It does argue for the use of modern technologies, particularly information communication technology (ICT) to ”help improve city governance, energy and resource use efficiency, delivery of services and create employment opportunities.” ICT can underpin smart grids---maybe---for urban power, water, transport, education and health care.

8.    Curb Human Induced Climate Change and Ensure Clean Energy for All: Defines the problem, its seriousness and its various aspects. Strategies include (1) increase energy efficiency, (2) increase urban land use density, (3) intelligent power grids, (4) increase use of renewable energy sources—possibly nuclear---and carbon capture and sequestration, (5) reduce deforestation and emission reduction in agriculture, (6) reduction of industrial GHG emissions. Local community cooperative or municipal ownership of power generating, storage and transmission systems emphasized and encouraged. Development of new technologies to accomplish the above. The network claims that transformation of energy use in the industrial and agricultural systems of the World---I would add developed World---will perhaps be the greatest

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political, technical and organizational challenge... feat if accomplished humanity will ever face.  Throughout the draft, transfer of technology from.the rich, industrially developed world to the developing world is stressed. Innovative people in    developing countries often develop technologies that are more appropriate to their environment and culture using local materials and resources that are less costly than imported technologies.

9. Secure            Ecosystem Services, Biodiversity and Good management of Natural Resources:
Ensure robust ecosystems—oceans, seas, coastal zones forests, mountains, dry and wetlands. Require polluters to pay. All—government, business, institutions, CSOs—participate in and protect and preserve local, regional ecosystems including environmental commons—fertile ground, rivers, creeks, aquifers, woodland. Have robust, transparent, monitoring, inventory and protective systems in place by 2020. Local communities should have sovereignty over all common natural and capital resources within their jurisdictions. All local and regional governments and businesses/farms commit to transparent management agricultural land, mines, woodlands, water and hydrocarbon resources. All the above are good means and ends to shoot for, but we need to plan strategies to develop and establish them.

10.Transform Governance for Sustainable Development:  “The public sector, business…commit   
 to transparency, accountability and government without corruption.” Committing and following through are two different behaviors. A strong community civil society of common people is needed to ensure non-corruption.  “International rules governing international finance, trade, corporate reporting, technology, and intellectual property should be made constant achieving SDGs.  I’m not sure what that means but international and national rules on those issues should not preempt local and regional mores, customs and laws. The three targets look OK but intellectual property needs redefining and reconsideration as a useful sustainable development construct.
                         Response to the Sustainable Development Solutions Network’s
           
       Action Agenda for Sustainable Development 2015-2030

                                       By Alan N. Connor

The ten proposed Sustainable Development Goals (SDGs) are appropriate. They are intended to establish a framework for implementing sustainable development post 2015 when the UN’s Millenium    Development Goals (MDGs) expire. The terminology in some is very broad, general and amorphous and subject to a variety of interpretations. To some extent, that too is appropriate. Because need, ecology, resources and culture vary from community to community---rural agricultural vs. urban industrial, temperate vs. tropical vs. arctic--- different goal definitions and specifics are appropriate for different places. Strategy and tactical action has to vary from place to place to account for those variations.

The report defines problems and barriers to achievement of MDG goals and targets. It sets a general frame for modifying the means to approach some of those targets via the SDGs that are slated to replace the 2000-2015 MDGs.  But specific strategies are often absent.

The authors argue correctly that going back to doing Business As Usual (BAU) prior to the 2008 financial collapse, will not enable sustainable development. They point out that it was a major cause of the failure to reach most MDG targets as well as the cause of the 2008 recession. Nevertheless, they advocate instituting and continuing much of the same global big business investment in developing countries and global institutional control of critical systems—eg: energy, transportation, international relations and trade.

They are for the inclusion of the poor, near poor and workers of the World in global and national policy conversations. A strategy for including them is not discussed. The report mentions, in a number of places, giving them power to participate. Leaders of multi and transnational corporations, international institutions, multi and transnational corporations do not voluntarily share or give up power. It has to be taken. Too often it has been taken or attempted to be taken by violent revolution. We need a strategy of inclusion that by passes that.

There is hope now days that the transfer of some power to the common people, so they can participate in and actually influence the conversations, will be nonviolent. We saw that two years ago in Tunisia. I saw it work in the city of Dayton, Ohio in the 70s. A number of civil societies and NGOs in developing countries are speaking up. Some have written responses to this report and to the High Level Panel’s (HLP) report on the Post 2015 Agenda. Because they may have support of their governments and their sheer numbers, they may be able to defy extant leaders and institutions such as the World Bank, the International Monetary Fund (IMF) and the World Trade Organization (WTO) with immunity .

The Sustainable Development Solutions Network (SDSN) was composed of members of a number of professional, business, academic, scientific and civic organizations. One is the International Society of
Ecological Economics (ISEE) of which I am a member, although I am not an economist.  They mean well. But most have no idea of what the poor and near poor have been up against for centuries. Many, maybe most network members have been indoctrinated in conventional, neo-classical economics and
and cling to those theories and practices.  Although in their report they claim those BAU practices have failed and will continue to do so, thinking of another paradigm is difficult. Some of their proposals are tweaks of that paradigm.

In their draft, they support a global economy and global governance. They give lip service to localization but do not really support it. For those from poor, developing countries or from any country, to participate in policy conversations effectively their power will have to be accepted by those now in power.
(The red print is my thoughts or what I think needs to be included.)         
                                                                                     1
Sustainable development has four dimensions according to the network. They are (1) Economic Development to end extreme poverty, (2) Social Inclusion, (3) Environmental Sustainability and (4) Good Governance. 

Economic Development is not defined or described. I assume that since it is a term in that has been in  wide use by many for a number of years, the network assumed no definition for the purposes of their
discussion was needed. Extreme poverty is defined as household income below $1.25 per day. That is extreme. There are other definitions I won’t mention here.

Social Inclusion is not defined. To me, it means including all people in policy making conversations at all levels of government from local municipal to global. It also means including all people’s access to natural resources, education, work, health care and other community opportunities.

Environmental Sustainability means staying within Earth’s planetary boundaries. That is, do not extract or
harvest Earth’s resources at rates faster than the resources can reproduce or regenerate themselves.

Good Governance is non-corrupt, transparent, socially just and open to participation of all interested and concerned people---i.e. it is inclusive.

                                              The Ten Sustainable Development Goals

1.    Eradicate Extreme Poverty: Poverty that is not extreme is not defined. What they are shooting for by implication is prosperity for all.  The network’s major strategy is “adopt sustainable agricultural methods worldwide, also maintain a clean water supply—no ag chemical or livestock pollutants. Stabilizing population and producing food primarily for local community consumption and sustainability is not mentioned.  Community food and natural resource sovereignty are not mentioned, nor is any means of production other than agriculture. Later in 7, productive cities are discussed.

2.    Development Within Planetary Boundaries: Limit extraction and harvesting of natural resources to the rate at which they can be reproduced. Decouple resource use from income and economic growth. Shift to low carbon energy sources for agriculture, transit, energy generation and construction of buildings and infrastructure. Not included were: reduce discarding goods to rates at which the ecosystem can absorb them. That reduces pollution and helps maintain biodiversity. Also not included --- as all ecological economists do---is coupling resource use with local community ecological, economic and social sustainability and banning the conversion of non-renewable resources to nonessentials.

3.    Effective Learning for All Children and Youth for a Livelihood: Adopt a lifecycle perspective on the learning needs of individuals of all ages. In some communities and cultures, training for many traditional occupations has been shunned or ignored. Starting in early childhood, access to learning those occupations---farming, fishing, forestry--- should be supported in ecologically sound ways .(Italics added for emphasis.) Societies need to (1) promote and support the central role of teacher, especially the innovative teacher, (2) look beyond traditional and formal schools (3) support and implement adult women’s functional literacy. Literate mothers enable early childhood learning. Also vocational education and apprenticeships to connect students with potential employers and jobs. Does not mention that business, particularly multi and transnationals are not in business to create jobs and employment. Local governments and communities must work to develop economically, ecologically and socially sustainable work roles and enable local people to learn to competently perform them and be justly compensated.


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4.     Gender Equality, Social Inclusion, Human Rights: To me this is one of the very broad and amorphous goals. Human Rights covers a lot of territory. Discrimination of any group undermines sustainable development. The strategy suggested for achieving this goal is instituting legal and administrative reforms---actions---that realize, not guarantee, the economic and social rights, including equal access to basic public services and infrastructure of all members of society. I would add: legally guarantee equal access of all members of the community to the community’s natural and capital resources on the condition that extraction, harvesting and use of such resource increases the probability of community sustainability. Promote peace, eliminate violent civil conflict. Missing is a strategy for promoting peace---within communities, nations, the World---or eliminating violent civil conflict.

5.    Achieve Health and Well Being for All: Well being is not defined, therefore amorphous to me. It could be defined as a minimum quality of life, a life style, standard of living all of which might vary by person, place or culture. Socio-economic status or minimum income level---a lot higher than $1.25 per day---might be used to define it. The suggested strategy includes (1) deploy more community health workers, (2) increase public investment in extension of primary health systems, (3) develop and establish universal health coverage. But a strategy is needed to do that.

6.    Improve Agricultural Systems, Raise Rural Prosperity: Identifies environmental problems in food production including human induced climate change,          inefficient use of water and loss of bio-diversity. It IDs the malfunctioning of the ag-industrial food chain but specifies no particular mal-functions. Points to post harvest waste, which is significant, and spoilage due to poor storage and processing systems. Does not address a worldwide food distribution system that delivers food to the economic elites and bypasses poor and working class communities, nor the export emphasis of industrial agribusiness which prices agriculture labor out of the food market it produces. Strategically, It does support enabling small land holders to produce increased yields for and connect to local and wider markets. Pushing soil too hard usually requires chemicals that feed plants, degrade soil and pollute ground and surface water via runoff. Claims net food production, worldwide, will have to increase 70 percent by 2050 to feed the increasing population. It does not address reducing food waste by 70 percent or more, population control or correcting the maldistribution problem. Bringing more land into production is suggested. They do not consider what types of land should not be converted to agriculture.

7.     Empower Inclusive, Productive, Resilient Cities:  This is another amorphous one. Urban populations and densities are projected to increase. Half the World’s population now is Urban.
Problems are cited. Urban poverty and slums being two major ones. The strategy is to reduce poverty, end slum formation and increase productivity---of what?---and insure universal access to infrastructure and services such as housing, water reticulation, sanitation, waste and insuring such universal access. It does argue for the use of modern technologies, particularly information communication technology (ICT) to ”help improve city governance, energy and resource use efficiency, delivery of services and create employment opportunities.” ICT can underpin smart grids---maybe---for urban power, water, transport, education and health care.

8.    Curb Human Induced Climate Change and Ensure Clean Energy for All: Defines the problem, its seriousness and its various aspects. Strategies include (1) increase energy efficiency, (2) increase urban land use density, (3) intelligent power grids, (4) increase use of renewable energy sources—possibly nuclear---and carbon capture and sequestration, (5) reduce deforestation and emission reduction in agriculture, (6) reduction of industrial GHG emissions. Local community cooperative or municipal ownership of power generating, storage and transmission systems emphasized and encouraged. Development of new technologies to accomplish the above. The network claims that transformation of energy use in the industrial and agricultural systems of the World---I would add developed World---will perhaps be the greatest

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political, technical and organizational challenge... feat if accomplished humanity will ever face.  Throughout the draft, transfer of technology from.the rich, industrially developed world to the developing world is stressed. Innovative people in    developing countries often develop technologies that are more appropriate to their environment and culture using local materials and resources that are less costly than imported technologies.

9. Secure            Ecosystem Services, Biodiversity and Good management of Natural Resources:
Ensure robust ecosystems—oceans, seas, coastal zones forests, mountains, dry and wetlands. Require polluters to pay. All—government, business, institutions, CSOs—participate in and protect and preserve local, regional ecosystems including environmental commons—fertile ground, rivers, creeks, aquifers, woodland. Have robust, transparent, monitoring, inventory and protective systems in place by 2020. Local communities should have sovereignty over all common natural and capital resources within their jurisdictions. All local and regional governments and businesses/farms commit to transparent management agricultural land, mines, woodlands, water and hydrocarbon resources. All the above are good means and ends to shoot for, but we need to plan strategies to develop and establish them.

10.Transform Governance for Sustainable Development:  “The public sector, business…commit   
 to transparency, accountability and government without corruption.” Committing and following through are two different behaviors. A strong community civil society of common people is needed to ensure non-corruption.  “International rules governing international finance, trade, corporate reporting, technology, and intellectual property should be made constant achieving SDGs.  I’m not sure what that means but international and national rules on those issues should not preempt local and regional mores, customs and laws. The three targets look OK but intellectual property needs redefining and reconsideration as a useful sustainable development construct.